I have started to write this post before the chapter is publishable. It is an overly long chapter (27 pages, double spaced) and is perhaps a little wordy for it. My other criticism is that there’s not a huge amount of conflict, which I know is a no-no in fiction, however I would submit to you that it is still an important chapter, based on what’s to happen later. Or, I shouldn’t say that there is little conflicts that will likely blow up to be large ones later on. It is important that we have a firm basis for Harry’s later conflict.
I am super stoked that I have finally been able to get a second chapter written for this story. I’ve written several versions of the first chapter over the last three years, none except the published one are fit for viewing. I have even written the opening paragraphs to chapter two on at least one other occasion, however I have never even come close to finishing the second chapter. And I think, as far as the writing goes now, that this chapter came out better than nI thought it would (even though there is too much walking about and sitting down). I have linked to the chapter here, and will update with text in the next day or so (if everything goes according to plan). Reviews are always welcome.